What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing number of schools providing tablets and laptop computer for students to use in school replacing books and other printed materials such as exams and assignments.

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It is inevitable that many school students use computers for writing exams, assignments,
etc which
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etc., which
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is now trending in the educational institutions. There are many adverse effects of replacing books and materials with online documents. Is it reliable to go with
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trend? Let us know more about the advantages and disadvantages.
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, children can able to access and learn about modern and advanced technologies and working with the electronics they can become a tech savvy.
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, computers can
speedup
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speed up
some things like online exams, auto corrections, and sending the reports through emails. It reduces a lot of time where children can learn new things online.
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, students can able to download and share with other students even when the other student is absent
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, we can save papers as we can able to write and read anything from online.
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, there is inconsistency when comes to providing tabs and laptops as it would cost more eventually there will be
increase
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an increase
in the school and tuition fees.
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, tablets and laptops for all students may not be possible in some schools and as all the works depends on network and internet connection which is unreliable.
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, the more screen time can
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effect
have an effect upon
affect
childrens
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children's
vision.
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, recent research shows that five in ten students have vision problems to due more screen time.
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but not least, as aforementioned, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages to replace the computers with books and other printed materials is an effective way to put up learning and educational exercises and assignments to the students.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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