You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining - Why do you want to help - How can you help them - When will you be available

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to offer my services as a volunteer to work for the

benefits

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of the elderly people of our society. Let me explain it in detail. I am a student of graduation doing a degree in "Geriatric psychology". My

first

semester has ended and now there is a gap of two months before the start of

second

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semester. I possess excellent reading abilities so I could read for

the

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people with weaker vision. Other than that, I can take people

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the wheelchair and move around the garden of the area in the evening. In

this

way, I can communicate with them to know their problems which will be beneficial for me in writing a thesis for my degree. I am pleased to tell you that I am available for a full day from morning till night for a whole week. It would be my pleasure to serve

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the

aging

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population of our society. Hoping to receive a positive response from you.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

171 words

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You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining - Why do you want to help - How can you help them - When will you be available

The Closing

Internet has advantages and disadvantages.Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is a good idea to socialize with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, many employees lack soft skill such as communication and working in the teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills ?

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?