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You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining - Why do you want to help - How can you help them - When will you be available

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to offer my services as a volunteer to work for the
benefits
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 of the elderly people of our society. Let me explain it in detail. I am a student of graduation doing a degree in "Geriatric psychology". My
first
 semester has ended and now there is a gap of two months before the start of
second
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 semester. I possess excellent reading abilities so I could read for
the
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people with weaker vision. Other than that, I can take people
on
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 the wheelchair and move around the garden of the area in the evening. In
this
 way, I can communicate with them to know their problems which will be beneficial for me in writing a thesis for my degree. I am pleased to tell you that I am available for a full day from morning till night for a whole week. It would be my pleasure to serve
for
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the
aging
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 population of our society. Hoping to receive a positive response from you.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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