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school children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage and give your opinions

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Thanks to globalization, computers are easily available in education
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
.
Therefore
 school pupils use computers in schools rather than ever.
However
,
this
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 will discuss about the pros in the
first
peragraph
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraph
 and
then
 it will concentrate on its cons in the subsequent paragraph.
First
 and foremost, numerous studies have consistently found that using
computer
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a computer
the computer
 for study purposes is more beneficial for gathering too much information about any subject. A
best
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good
 illustration is that due to using
computer
 with internet connection is helpful to learn about history. With the help of
computer
,
student
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the student
see
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sees
 a real picture with its fully
information
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informed
 and easily compared with other details. As a reason,
computer
 are useful for students in their study purpose.
Moreover
, students can prepare their assignments in computers through the help of google. With regards its ill effects, using computers in schools is not good for students in some ways.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
 pupils
lose
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loses
 their confidence if they use
computer
 for education and feel shame when they give speech in any public place because of their
computer
 habit.
Secondly
, using
computer
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a computer
the computer
computers
 is more harmful
for
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to
 health because it is badly effected the eyes of school children. All in all, these are the disadvantages which depict that
computer
 is not good for students. As
such it
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such, it
 can be concluded that
although
computer
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the computer
are
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is
 useful for students
such
 as
geathering
a group of persons together in one place
gathering
feathering
furthering
 knowledge and complete
assignments but
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assignments, but
 the disadvantages are more because it is effected the health of student and decrease their
confident
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confidence
.
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