In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is irrefutable that in past
peolpe
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
give more preference to small local
shops but
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shops, but
now large shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
or malls are becoming popular for doing shopping due to
this
numerous small local shops have closed, in recent time period.
However
, I believe that closed small shops
is
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are
beneficial in some ways and detrimental in other ways and
thus
I would
considered
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consider
it to be both positive as well as a negative development. Closing small shops can have a few positive aspects
for
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of
people.
First
and foremost merit is that all
type
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types
of products either it is an artificial or any household thing are
provide
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provided
under one roof in big shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
or malls.
For example
, in
chandigarh
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Chandigarh
city, there are
huge number
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a huge number
of shopping malls available for doing shopping.
Plople
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People
can purchase anything according to own needs in
such
type of places. To put it simply, thanks to big shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
, people do not face any difficulty
to
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in
purchasing something because in small shops, a little amount of variety is available so it is difficult to human being purchase
variety
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a variety
of products in one shop. All in all,
this
is the advantage which
depict
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depicts
that it is a positive development.
In addition
, it should not be
for gotten
not noticed inadvertently
forgotten
that small shops are an income source for some poor people. As a reason, majority of needy
peolpe
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
are
complete their
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complete, their
rudimental
belonging to or concerning a regiment
regimental
requirements with the helps of their small local shops.
For instance
, in small villages and town, people give more preference to start their own business as a shop to complete their fundamental needs like; bread, cloths and shelter.
From
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For
this
reason, it is evident that closed small local shops
is
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are
a
nagitive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
also
. As
such it
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such, it
can be concluded that, I would like to reiterate that the trend of closing small local shops can be considered positive to some extent.
However
, it is a negative development overall.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail outlets
  • consumer behavior
  • shop locally
  • convenience
  • variety
  • economic growth
  • job creation
  • community
  • personal touch
  • small businesses
  • local economy
  • big corporations
  • dependence
  • shopping habits
  • urbanization
  • globalization
  • competition
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