In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
It is irrefutable that in past
peolpe
give more preference to small local (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
shops but
now large shopping Accept comma addition
shops, but
centers
or malls are becoming popular for doing shopping due to an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
this
numerous small local shops have closed, in recent time period. However
, I believe that closed small shops is
beneficial in some ways and detrimental in other ways and Suggestion
are
thus
I would considered
it to be both positive as well as a negative development.
Closing small shops can have a few positive aspects Suggestion
consider
for
people. Suggestion
of
First
and foremost merit is that all type
of products either it is an artificial or any household thing are Suggestion
types
provide
under one roof in big shopping Suggestion
provided
centers
or malls. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
For example
, in chandigarh
city, there are Suggestion
Chandigarh
huge number
of shopping malls available for doing shopping. Suggestion
a huge number
Plople
can purchase anything according to own needs in Suggestion
People
such
type of places. To put it simply, thanks to big shopping centers
, people do not face any difficulty an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
to
purchasing something because in small shops, a little amount of variety is available so it is difficult to human being purchase Suggestion
in
variety
of products in one shop. All in all, Suggestion
a variety
this
is the advantage which depict
that it is a positive development.
Suggestion
depicts
In addition
, it should not be for gotten
that small shops are an income source for some poor people. As a reason, majority of needy not noticed inadvertently
forgotten
peolpe
are (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
complete their
Accept comma addition
complete, their
rudimental
requirements with the helps of their small local shops. belonging to or concerning a regiment
regimental
For instance
, in small villages and town, people give more preference to start their own business as a shop to complete their fundamental needs like; bread, cloths and shelter. From
Suggestion
For
this
reason, it is evident that closed small local shops is
a Suggestion
are
nagitive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
also
.
As such it
can be concluded that, I would like to reiterate that the trend of closing small local shops can be considered positive to some extent. Accept comma addition
such, it
However
, it is a negative development overall.Submitted by aulakhn936 on
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