One of your colleagues from another country comes to your office for an official meeting. Write a letter to him/her and say – Describe how to get from the airport to his/her hotel. – Describe the hotel he/she will be staying in. – Describe the arrangement for the meeting.counter

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Dear

Alies

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Alice

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, I hope you are doing well.My name is

Supandeep

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Sandeep

kaur

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.I am your colleague and working in Netherlands branch.I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have

charge

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to take care

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your pickup as well as accommodation facilities. I came to know that you are coming on 18 December at 4.30pm.I will send my driver

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airport

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for your pickup.He will be waiting for you at

arrival

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gate and I will give him

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of your name so that you will not face difficulty to find him. I booked

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hotel for your accommodation.

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hotel is near to the place where the meeting

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Furthermore

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your dinner and breakfast

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included in

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place. The meeting will be started at 9.00 in the morning.

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the manager of my company will give the speech and

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we all will discuss

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further

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projects.At the end of

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meeting

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their

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about some issues. I hope you will not face any type of problem yours lovingly,

Supandeep

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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