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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for,while others think that good working atmosphere is more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is irrefutable that in past people give more preference to the
quality
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 of
work
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 rather than high
salary
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 as compare to nowadays.
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, majority of masses think that high
salary
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 is more important rather than good working atmosphere. While others opposite with
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 view.
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,
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 easy will discuss both contradictory arguments and
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 present my own opinion in the conclusion. On one hand, people give more preference to high wages due to some reasons.
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, some person thinks it is difficult to complete own fundamental needs with low
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 so they do not satisfied with little income.
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, many people feel better when they earn more because of their expensive needs.
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, my uncle who is a doctor, his
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 is too much difficult but they feel better because they earn more money from
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job
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. All in all, these are the reasons why so Plople thinks that the high earning is more important rather than the
quality
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 of the
work
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.
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, few masses believe that the good
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 of peace
work
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 is more beneficial as compared to its
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.
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, people find it interesting to do
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 type of
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 which provide good atmosphere. Because they feel good when they doing nice
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.
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, if a person is interesting to do the
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,
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 one can achieve goals through hard
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 and earn more due to promotions. For these reasons, it is evident that good type of
work
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 is necessary than high
salary
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. In conclusion,
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 a few individuals give more importance to the high
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. But I would like to consider is that the
quality
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 of
work
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 is more important.
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