The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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analytic report provides information pertaining to the changes likely to occur at South West Airport after next year's redevelopment. In concise terms, it is predicted that changes will occur to increase the number of gates and passenger facilities

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rearrangements will be made to most areas of the plan. It can

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be noted that both transport control areas are the most structures to remain in place. Looking at the departure area, it is evident that extra entrance doors will be fitted.

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, the check-in zone is expected to be relocated to the position of the cafe which now is on the right-hand side

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the cafe is moved to the south-west corner which will be located between the departure which will be located between departure entrances and a bag drop area. Moving through the security passport control, shops will be built in open spaces.

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, a sky train is predicted to permanently replace the walkway and a

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10 gates which are redesigned into a Y shape will be added. Moving to the arrival area, it can be seen that new convenience facilities are likely to be available. On the right side of arrivals, there are plans to build a coffee shop adjacent to an ATM machine which was added below it.

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, in the right-side corner, a car hire will be built next to arrival doors, where more extra doors will be fitted

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While the essay covers all the relevant points from the plans, it would benefit from a clearer structure. For instance, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific change in the airport and avoid combining too many points in one paragraph.

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Try to provide more precise details and descriptions. For example, mention exact locations and changes without confusion ('departure which will be located between')

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The essay mentions all the main changes planned in the redevelopment, giving a comprehensive overview.

coherence cohesion

There is a logical progression of ideas, despite some structural issues.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

236 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

terminal
car park
runways
redevelopment
proposed changes
expanded terminals
new gates
additional parking
amenities
navigation
environmental impact
economic impact
job creation
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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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