he given graph illustrates the change in the prices of fresh fruits, vegetables, sugars, sweets, and carbonated drinks from 1978 to 2009. It is also representing consumer-price index during this period.

The given graph illustrates the change in the

prices

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of fresh fruits, vegetables, sugars, sweets, and carbonated drinks from 1978 to 2009. It is

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representing

consumer-price

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the consumer-price

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index during

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period

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.

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, what stands out from the graph is that the costs of fresh fruits and vegetables

were fluctuated

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fluctuated

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however

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these rates were the highest among all other items during

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time

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. The

prices

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of consumer-price index, sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks were increased gradually

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throughout

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time

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. In detail, the

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of fresh fruits and vegetables were 50% in the year 1979. From

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on, it fluctuated before rising significantly from

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nearly

180% to approximately 200% in 1996. The highest value for

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item was in the year 2009 which is just under 350%. The costs of consumer-price index , sugar and

sweers

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sweets

followed a similar trend where these

prices

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increased gradually in the given

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.

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, the cost of carbonated drinks rose slightly from 50% in 1979 to 100% in 1984. From

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on, it was relatively stable before rising to approximately 110% in 2009. In 1985, the

prices

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of all goods

were

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intersected

whcih

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which

was 100%.