You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter • explain where you live • describe the problem • give reasons why you do not want this development

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Dear Sir, I am writing in regards to the article you have posted in your newspaper on 10th December,19 about the expansion of the Dwarka airport and increasing the number of flights over there. I would like to tell you that I am living in the same area and the airport is 15 minutes walk from my house. We the local residents are already facing problems because of the heavy noises of the

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and the traffic congestion in our area. We cannot sleep at night and even concentrate on our daily routine work because of the noise pollution created in our locality. Already, our area is densely populated, and once the airport gets expanded our problems will get doubled up automatically. The traffic in our locality will increase and the disturbance caused by the frequent flights will result in more trouble in our lives. I would like you to write a new article in your newspaper describing the issues that will be caused by

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issue. Yours faithfully Vaishali

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

180 words

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