Write an essay discussing the pros and cons of smartphones

In
this
day and age, the
topis
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top is
that the benefits and drawbacks of smart phones
deserves
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deserve
consideration. One side of the discussion
believies
accept as true; take to be true
believes
believe
that smart phones had a lot of advantages for human in nowadays. It should
first
be
point
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pointed
out that
smartphones
so
convience
persuaded of; very sure
convinced
convince
convenience
. One of the major
reason
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reasons
for buying
smartphones
is it can be
instead
for some
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
tools. For instant, when a smartphone connected
with
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to
the internet, people can pay bills without cash,
thay
people in general
they
also
transfer money for someone without the ATM or check emails without computers.
This
point of view
also
supported because
smartphones
can help people keep in touch with
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
Thor
friends.
For example
,
smartphones
are always connected to the internet which allowed people contact with
thier
of them or themselves
their
friends stay far away
by
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from
some free apps like Facebook, Viber and so on.
Besides
that, some function on
smartphones
can support for people’s life like the
celander
a system of timekeeping that defines the beginning and length and divisions of the year
calendar
calender
Icelander
function will remind you to not forget an important meeting with your clients. There is a different point of view which holds that
smartphones
also
bring some disadvantages. I’m pretty sure that
smartphones
can be distracting. Notify from calls, messages, applications, always take concentration from people. When you attend to these notifications, you will find yourself attached to the phone.
Moreover
,
smartphones
will
decreased
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decrease
social interaction of human. People try to show themselves and try to have a lot of friends on social
network but
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network, but
they can not starting conservation with strangers in a meeting. Anyway,
costly
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cost
for
smartphones
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smart phones
is a big issue. Phone repairs and maintenance can cost people a lot of money.
Thus it
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Thus, it
can be seen
thatb
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that from
that by
that of
that b
both sides have points in their favour.
Inconclusion
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In conclusion
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that any
smartphones
will has pros and
cons but
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cons, but
how to promote strengths and overcome disadvantages of
smartphones
depends
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depend
on the use of each person.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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