Write an essay discussing the pros and cons of smartphones

In

this

day and age, the

topis

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top is

that the benefits and drawbacks of smart phones

deserves

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deserve

consideration. One side of the discussion

believies

accept as true; take to be true

believes

believe

that smart phones had a lot of advantages for human in nowadays. It should

first

be

point

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pointed

out that

smartphones

so

convience

persuaded of; very sure

convinced

convince

convenience

. One of the major

reason

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reasons

for buying

smartphones

is it can be

instead

for some

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

tools. For instant, when a smartphone connected

with

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to

the internet, people can pay bills without cash,

thay

people in general

they

also

transfer money for someone without the ATM or check emails without computers.

This

point of view

also

supported because

smartphones

can help people keep in touch with

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

Thor

friends.

For example

,

smartphones

are always connected to the internet which allowed people contact with

thier

of them or themselves

their

friends stay far away

by

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from

some free apps like Facebook, Viber and so on.

Besides

that, some function on

smartphones

can support for people’s life like the

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a system of timekeeping that defines the beginning and length and divisions of the year

calendar

calender

Icelander

function will remind you to not forget an important meeting with your clients. There is a different point of view which holds that

smartphones

also

bring some disadvantages. I’m pretty sure that

smartphones

can be distracting. Notify from calls, messages, applications, always take concentration from people. When you attend to these notifications, you will find yourself attached to the phone.

Moreover

,

smartphones

will

decreased

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decrease

social interaction of human. People try to show themselves and try to have a lot of friends on social

network but

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network, but

they can not starting conservation with strangers in a meeting. Anyway,

costly

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cost

for

smartphones

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smart phones

is a big issue. Phone repairs and maintenance can cost people a lot of money.

Thus it

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Thus, it

can be seen

thatb

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that from

that by

that of

that b

both sides have points in their favour.

Inconclusion

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In conclusion

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that any

smartphones

will has pros and

cons but

Accept comma addition

cons, but

how to promote strengths and overcome disadvantages of

smartphones

depends

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depend

on the use of each person.