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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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A great deal larger number of people are turning towards Herbal medicines,
however
 some people believe in the inaffectiveness o
f these methods
power to be effective; the quality of being able to bring about an effect
effectiveness
 of curing and a step ahead, some others believe in the worst implications, that these curing methods may cause of. The significant large number of people are adopting the
alternative
 medicans for fina
ncial re
the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicines
asons especially in the poor countries. Inadequate financial resources and lacking of government backing medical support in
such
 a countries is resu
lting to
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country
general public
m
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in
ore prone towards
such
 kind of medical treatments. These treatments do not happen heavy on the patient budget and
besides
 get patient invol
ved
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getting
by psyc
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the patient
patients
hologically as if getting treatment and
thus
 feeling better.
Additionally
, in large number of c
ases these u
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a large number
sing
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cases, these
alternative
 medicines show no considerable record of any major fatal implication, that might be a case with other medical treatments while doing surgeries or sometimes witnessed in general cases as well. So,
this
 is perhaps another reason, patients are joining in
alternative
 medic
ines club.
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the alternative medicines club
Furthermore
, sometimes
alternative
 mediciens may cau
se harm t
the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicines
medicine
oo, especially in the case of non-trained doctors, as they are a common phenomina comes w
ith alter
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
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phenomena
nate medicines. Patients complaints about worst converse effects of
alternative
 medicines . It is
also
 obs
er
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.
ved that self medication is
also
 very common with alternate medicines, that made the situation worse. So, to sum up and adding my personal point of view, I believe that alternate medicines can be a cheap method of t
reatm
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cheaper
ent if backed by government concerned departments and more research work is put in the field.
Further
 by educating people about implications of self medications of even alternate medicines and impeaded them of
such act
made difficult or slow
impeded
s. One solution is more regulation are introduced in
this
 new field.

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