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People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?

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It is observed that in a growing number of countries, people are being slept, less than the past due increased working hours in the atmosphere of rising inflation.
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 trend has several adverse implications for both individuals and society. The relevant factors are elaborated in the below essay with particular examples.
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 with, in the modern world, many countries experience skyrocketing prices of goods and services. As a consequence, people cannot rely on standard working hours to maintain their living standards, which inevitably compels them to work overtime sacrificing their sleeping time.
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, according to a study that had been taken place in the UK, an average citizen of many developing countries, sleeps less than 8 hours per
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 because he/she works more than 10 hours a
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,
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 tendency is not healthy enough over the well-being of individuals and well as the community. If people do not receive adequate sleep their body parts do not function properly in the
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 their productivity falls significantly. To illustrate, as per a medical research conducted in the USA, people who do not rest their bodies with regular and quality sleep tend to produce inaccurate
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. To conclude, it is indisputable that people tend to allocate their sleeping time to earn more against the rising prices.
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 trend is alarming for both human health and for the nation as it will deteriorate the productivity of its nationals it should be eradicated with suitable precautions.
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