The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of salmon fish in 3 major stages, from being an egg to

grow

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growing

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into an

adult

salmon.

Overall

, baby

salmons

,

who

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which

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hatch from eggs that are kept below the reeds, transform into

adult

salmons

during

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over

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a period of 9

years

.

Moreover

, in

this

duration, they constantly change their locations as they grow up.

Salmons

hatch from

miniscule

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minuscule

eggs, which are located in the

slow moving

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slow-moving

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upper river, under the small stones and the reeds. The hatching process takes a period of 5-6 months and the salmon fledgelings are known as 'fry'. They are only 3-8 cm in length and they move from the upper river to a

fast flowing

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fast-flowing

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lower river, where they live for approx 4

years

. After 4

years

, they grow up to become 'smolt'

are

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and are

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approximately 12-15 cm in size. Smolts generally survive in

open

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the open

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sea for a striking period of 5

years

. Eventually, smolts transform into

adult

salmons

,

that

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which

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are

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is

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huge in size at about 70-76 cm.

Adult

salmons

are found in the upper rivers as they prefer

slow moving

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slow-moving

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waters that serve as their breeding grounds to lay eggs in the reeds.