News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Photographs have become

integral part

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an integral part

newspaper

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the newspaper

a newspaper

. Some people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

the pictorial presentation of

news create

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news, create

more impact rather than written

aricles

nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication

articles

. I

completly

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

agree, the given statements on

this

essay, I will support

this

essay with my valid points. I always have a doubt 'Is people read all the

colom

a line of units following one after another

column

in the

news paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

most

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Most

of them are

intrest

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

to read free paper. They just see the news which

is attract

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has attracted

is attracting

is attracted

attracts

or pull them to read, Most of the people read news, based on the pictures which is attracted to them. The pictures triggers them to read that particular news.

Comparetively

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Comparatively

pictures are easiest modem to understand and present news or incidents rather than articles.

For example

, every

monday

the second day of the week; the first working day

Monday

one of my

favourate

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

news paper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

publish

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publishes

a special

colom

a line of units following one after another

column

claim

for

children which

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children, which

is contain lots of

informations

a message received and understood

information

like general knowledge,

kids

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kids'

activities,

quiz

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a quiz

quizzes

and even more activities.

This

particular

colom

a line of units following one after another

column

claim

contain full of attractive images and activities which pull the children to read those

colom

assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing

claims

. During my childhood, I

egarly

with eagerness; in an eager manner

eagerly

wait to see those news

section

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sections

and collect and show to my friends. Today, children to elders are more

intrest

a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something

interest

interested

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sports

realted

being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

activities and news. Especially, in India people are more

egar

having or showing keen interest or intense desire or impatient expectancy

eager

to know

cricket related news

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the cricket related news

. Most of them have a

habbit

an established custom

habit

collect

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collecting

those news and save it for future references and other purposes.

For example

, our

news papers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

have a special

colom

a line of units following one after another

column

for sports related news. The sports

colom

a line of units following one after another

column

contain

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contains

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

pictures like players, grounds and crowds. I usually collect all the articles along with my brother and show it to people.

Thus

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This

is evident that if there is no pictures the media lose the attention of a particular group of audience. To sum up, I

believ

accept as true; take to be true

believe

pictures are more important to present the news properly and to attract the people. But, the media should

censored

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censor

or cut some of

pictures

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the pictures

which is related to violence, child related news. Because, it

mignt

expresses possibility

might

affect the particular population or

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

Compared to our parent’s generation, life has become much more stressful. As a result, stress-related illnesses are on the increase around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The urban transport system receives more funds compared to the rural transport system. Why do you think it is so? How can it be solved?

The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagre?