News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Photographs have become
integral part
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an integral part
of
newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
. Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
the pictorial presentation of
news create
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news, create
more impact rather than written
aricles
nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication
articles
. I
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
agree, the given statements on
this
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essay, I will support
this
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essay with my valid points. I always have a doubt 'Is people read all the
Use synonyms
colom
a line of units following one after another
column
in the
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
?'
most
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Most
of them are
intrest
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
to read free paper. They just see the news which
is attract
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has attracted
is attracting
is attracted
attracts
or pull them to read, Most of the people read news, based on the pictures which is attracted to them. The pictures triggers them to read that particular news.
Comparetively
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Comparatively
pictures are easiest modem to understand and present news or incidents rather than articles.
For example
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, every
monday
the second day of the week; the first working day
Monday
one of my
favourate
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
publish
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publishes
a special
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colom
a line of units following one after another
column
claim
for
children which
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children, which
is contain lots of
informations
a message received and understood
information
like general knowledge,
kids
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kids'
activities,
quiz
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a quiz
quizzes
and even more activities.
This
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particular
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colom
a line of units following one after another
column
claim
contain full of attractive images and activities which pull the children to read those
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colom
assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing
claims
. During my childhood, I
egarly
with eagerness; in an eager manner
eagerly
wait to see those news
section
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sections
and collect and show to my friends. Today, children to elders are more
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interested
to
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in
sports
realted
being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
activities and news. Especially, in India people are more
egar
having or showing keen interest or intense desire or impatient expectancy
eager
to know
cricket related news
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the cricket related news
. Most of them have a
habbit
an established custom
habit
of
collect
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collecting
those news and save it for future references and other purposes.
For example
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, our
news papers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
have a special
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colom
a line of units following one after another
column
for sports related news. The sports
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colom
a line of units following one after another
column
contain
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contains
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
pictures like players, grounds and crowds. I usually collect all the articles along with my brother and show it to people.
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Thus
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This
is evident that if there is no pictures the media lose the attention of a particular group of audience. To sum up, I
believ
accept as true; take to be true
believe
pictures are more important to present the news properly and to attract the people. But, the media should
censored
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censor
or cut some of
pictures
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the pictures
which is related to violence, child related news. Because, it
mignt
expresses possibility
might
affect the particular population or
pern
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Pern
per
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • empathize
  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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