You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

Dear Sir or Madam, The impetus behind writing
this
letter is to appreciate the efforts you made at your
school
to teach students. Three months back, I have had attended your cookery
school
to get some expertise in culinary art
although
the duration was six weeks, and I got the opportunity to learn how to cook international cuisines. Your teaching methodology is really commendable, but not to mention the fusion you do with various spices is exceptional. What is more, since I left the
school
, I took admission in
Masters
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in restaurant management. I
also
got a part-time job at a local Chinese restaurant, where I am working as an assistant to the chief.
In
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the supervision of the chief, I cook many Chinese dishes, and I am gradually getting hands-on Chinese food. I would like to suggest that your
school
should
also
offer baking classes. During my summer vacation, I would like to join your institute to get to know how to cook different cakes, pizzas. I believe that there
many
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things that I should learn about baking to get a job in any five-star hotel. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sara Khan

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Culinary skills
  • Gastronomy
  • Recipe repertoire
  • Hands-on experience
  • Gourmet
  • Cuisine
  • Master chef
  • Food preparation
  • Cooking techniques
  • Flavor profile
  • Culinary arts
  • Ingredient selection
  • Diverse palate
  • Seasoning and spices
  • Baking
  • Roasting
  • Sauteing
  • Food presentation
  • Nutritional value
  • Sous-chef
  • Culinary journey
  • Taste buds
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