By punishing murderers with death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Punishing murderers or any criminals

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are

an important law that

need

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needs

to be in practice by a country. By giving a verdict of

death

penalty

to a murderer, society is not guilty of committing

murder but

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murder, but

rather it is rising as a role model to the people by punishing the

wrong doers

a person who transgresses moral or civil law

wrongdoers

. Murder is a serious offence and the accused has done some serious damage. When a

person

commits a murder, he/she is not only killing a

person but

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person, but

rather they are destroying the whole family of the victim. I believe that even the

person

who was found guilty have to go through the same situation that he has forced on the victim.

This

way the family of the victim can get justice. By giving a

death

penalty

to the accused, society is creating a fragment of fear in people who has some of the similar ideas.

This

way those people who wanted to commit murder will hesitate to do so. I would like to share an

example which

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example, which

had happened

last

year. A

person

in our village has a tendency of taking revenge on

any one

any person

anyone

who opposes him. He would go to any extent to get his job done. There was a debate that took place

last

year where he was totally destroyed by the opposition candidate.

This

person

was unable to digest

this

fact and had planned to take his revenge by killing the

person

who humiliated him. So, as per his plan, he stabbed the other

person

and took his life. He got captured by the local police and was issued a

death

penalty

by the court.

This

incident had shaken the very roots of the village and the neighbouring regions and from that day onwards, not even a single

person

has spoken any word that gives the meaning “murder”. In conclusion, murderers need to be punished by

death

penalty

rather than giving a life sentence and feed them from the taxes that are taken from the common people including the family of the victims.

This

saves a lot of money and time.

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