In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others the do not have to start shool until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of theese views?

It is a

quiete

characterized by an absence or near absence of agitation or activity

quiet

quite

quieter

debatable issue, that when children should be sent to schools in order to start their

education

process. While it is common for some countries to start to educate pupils from four years old, but I tend to agree with other states' regulations, which allow children

to begin

their

education

at seven or eight.

To begin

with the positives of starting

education

at an early

ages

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age

, it is clear that

earlier children

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the earlier children

start to go to

school

, earlier they will graduate. As a consequence of

this

trend, more and more teenagers will may benefit from finishing

school

at

an

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a

younger

ages

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age

than in other countries, whose legal systems for

education

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educational

purposes do not allow pupils

to begin

to study at four years.

For example

, if a young person has finished

school

a couple of years earlier than others do, he or she will have more time to

hace

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

have

a search

on

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for

a job market or start to earn money for living.

As a result

, the governments that implied

this

system would gain a greater

benefits

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benefit

than those which did not.

In contrast

, the approach of forcing children to study at younger ages might cause severe health problems for them.

This

is because, when pupils' brains are not capable to manage a bulk load of information, they will may be

demotivated

and depressed. In a consequence,

this

may have

weaken

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weakened

their immune systems, which will may become extremely vulnerable

for

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to

diseases. Unlike with states' regulations which allow students to start their

education

process at younger ages, children who do begin to go to

school

later will be prepared better for

great

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greater

data load, and they will probably outcome these difficulties with less effort.

As a result

, their

healt

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

system

will have not been damaged

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will not damage

won't damage

because of

this

issue, and I believe that children's healthiness

are

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is

much more important than benefits for governments, which may become to

receieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

benefits from teenagers who are able to work at an earlier

ages

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age

. In conclusion,

although

permitting children to go to

schools

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school

earlier could bring some benefits for governments in terms of increased labour force, but I will give my preference to

protection

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the protection

of children's health rather than governments' budgets, as starting to study at an four years may have detrimental effects on pupils' health.