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Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to an item that I lost during my recent trip to India. The
lost
immediately past
last
 item was a silver iPhone 8 and it fell off the train during a train journey between Delhi and Agra. The was crowded and I guess it must have fallen down while I was boarding. By the time I had realized that my mobile was missing the train already left the station. I reported it to the railway authorities, but they could not find the phone even after an extensive search of the platform. The phone is valued at 500 dollars and is
also
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 an invaluable gift from my father. I have
also
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 attached the invoice of my
purchase along
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purchase, along
 with
this
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 letter. I purchased the insurance premium on 18th August, just prior to my trip. I request you to kindly process my claim as soon as possible. My insurance policy number us 3453453. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Nithin Reddy

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • respiratory diseases
  • heart conditions
  • incidence
  • affordable housing
  • stress
  • infectious diseases
  • preventative measures
  • cost-effective
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • comprehensive approach
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • exacerbated
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