In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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After a specific time and area in the US, teens are unable to step out of their homes, unless they are with older ones. I personally believe, that it should be an
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of safety for them,
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it's only possible to some extent. In
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essay we will discuss the reasons behind the statement. On the one hand, 'curfew' is imposed on those towns when something dangerous or suspicious
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is found.
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, it is a kind of security which is required for minor because at
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age, they don't understand between right or wrong. In the same way, if any, mature person is going along with them, it's not only protects the minor but
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provides proper guidance how to
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, one of my friends who lives in the US got stuck in the terrorist area, fortunately he was with his mentor, who assist him to reach home with due support or
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, the adolescent is the age when freedom is what needed utmost. Since, at the particular stage of life, teens crave to go out with friends and experience everything which provides satisfaction and adventures at the same time. Eventually, it's useful for the development in growing as they able to take decisions on their own in any circumstances.
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, when curfew is imposed in my place in which my younger cousin was stuck with his friends, they able to come up with that difficult situation by taking decision independently. In my final analysis, it's very crucial for younger ones being with adult in those areas where they are not safe.
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, restrictions are imposed on youth, but not all the time because they
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need privilege to explore anytime or anywhere.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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