You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: Explain why you are interested in helping Give details of suitable experience suggest ways you might help with the event.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the advertisement in yesterday's newspaper. I have seen that your organization requires volunteers for charity work which will be held on this
Thursday.
I am a retired bank official who has 30 years of experience in banking. After my retirement, I joined a restaurant for 2 years as a cook
because I am very proficient in cooking. So, because I am free at home now I have great culinary skills I want to join your charity event for cooking food
for homeless people
. This
opportunity not only provided me with a fixed schedule but also
gave me a chance to help people
. That's why I want to join this
event to keep myself busy and gain a sense of satisfaction by supporting needy people
.
I am already a member of "Our Home" NGO which is located at Weber Street. My role and responsibilities are to cook
food
for blind people
. Rather than sitting free at home, I prefer to work and help others. Also
, I have done a cookery course which includes various varieties to cook
for a large number of individuals. Apart from
this
, I cook
food
in the common kitchen of Sikh shrines as a volunteer.
So I suggest, I can help you in this
event as a cook
by making or serving food
. We can prepare sandwiches and pack them in the ziplock. It is a healthy food
option that can be served easily.
I am looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Navdeep KaurSubmitted by knavdeep3011 on
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coherence cohesion
The letter shows a good attempt at addressing the prompt with relevant details, yet it can be more effectively structured to ensure clarity and logical sequence. Particularly, the overview of your experience and how it pertains to the charity event should be highlighted more prominently.
task achievement
While your application contains all the needed elements, you could enhance the task achievement by directly addressing each point of the prompt with clear and distinct paragraphs. Start with expressing your interest to volunteer, then detail your relevant experience, and finally offer specific suggestions for the event.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
