In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In today's competitive

world many

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world, many

parents encouraged

there

of them or themselves

their

young ones to travel or work for a year before completing their education. In my point of view I totally agree with it. On one

hand some countries

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hand, some countries

prefer

there

of them or themselves

their

children's to work before winding up

there

of them or themselves

their

academics through which they can experience the world and meet different peoples which enhance them to learn the new culture new language..

while

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While

working it make them to know the competition and grasp the knowledge and mould them for better careers in

there

of them or themselves

their

future.

For

instance one

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instance, one

fourth of the foreign

countries

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country

kids work

n

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

on

in

read and they are achieving high bands compare to other undeveloped countries.

On the other hand

it has tremendous effect on children's who move during

there

of them or themselves

their

studies to other countries.. They involved themselves in working and taking responsibilities of

there

of them or themselves

their

families and earning

money which

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money, which

intend them to quit

there

of them or themselves

their

studies and go with the

flow which

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flow, which

lead to a major cause

for instance

sachin

diligent and thorough in inquiry or investigation

searching

tendulkar

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Tendulkar

went into his desired field and left his studies.. To

conclude if

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conclude, if

young ones enhance the opportunities they get in between will enhance

there

of them or themselves

their

careers

on the other hand

the if it is taken wrong will ruin

there

of them or themselves

their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

.