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Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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Success
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 differs from
person
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 to
person
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. While some people think that parenthood caring does not have any relationship with
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’s
success
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, I,
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, strongly disagree with
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 view for two reasons. The main significant reason in terms of an individual’s
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 which is brought by the guardians is hereditary talent. While some might argue that parental upbringing does not matter to succeed the
person
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, I feel that some children are already gifted with many skills in their childhood which is due to usually their mother or father possess that aptitudes.
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, if a
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 is an expert in solving math problems, it is evident that any one or both of his parents can possess
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 abilities. Family
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 is another reason. While I concede that most children tend to achieve
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 in the future without the
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 of their parents, I would argue that parents supportive attitude towards a
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 chosen career can lead to
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, and
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support
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 could foster
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's interest in that particular field.
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, having an obedient nature many children often have a dream to become an astronaut or an engineer, so there is every likelihood to get a supportive hand from the parents which results in them to have a better avenue by being a successful
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.
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, without their
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,
child
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 would be less inclined to fulfil his dream to be a successive
person
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.
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, he might quit from his goal due to dearth of supportive hand. To sum up, not only does
child
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’s authorize some skills since their birth by genes, but
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 supportive hand of their parent are the reasons for their
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.
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, I strongly believe parents upbringing are interrelated to a
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’s
success
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.
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