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Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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Success
 differs from
person
 to
person
. While some people think that parenthood caring does not have any relationship with
person
’s
success
, I,
however
, strongly disagree with
this
 view for two reasons. The main significant reason in terms of an individual’s
success
 which is brought by the guardians is hereditary talent. While some might argue that parental upbringing does not matter to succeed the
person
, I feel that some children are already gifted with many skills in their childhood which is due to usually their mother or father possess that aptitudes.
For instance
, if a
child
 is an expert in solving math problems, it is evident that any one or both of his parents can possess
such
 abilities. Family
support
 is another reason. While I concede that most children tend to achieve
success
 in the future without the
support
 of their parents, I would argue that parents supportive attitude towards a
child
 chosen career can lead to
success
, and
such
support
 could foster
child
's interest in that particular field.
For example
, having an obedient nature many children often have a dream to become an astronaut or an engineer, so there is every likelihood to get a supportive hand from the parents which results in them to have a better avenue by being a successful
person
.
In contrast
, without their
support
,
child
 would be less inclined to fulfil his dream to be a successive
person
.
As a result
, he might quit from his goal due to dearth of supportive hand. To sum up, not only does
child
’s authorize some skills since their birth by genes, but
also
 supportive hand of their parent are the reasons for their
success
.
Therefore
, I strongly believe parents upbringing are interrelated to a
person
’s
success
.
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