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You have been asked to write a letter of invitation to Professor W. Chan Kim asking him to give a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (NBOS). You should provide the following details in your letter:

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Dear Professor W. Chan Kim, I'm writing to ask whether you would be willing to present a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (NBOS) at the
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 as an invited speaker. As the Program Coordinator for
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conference
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, I have been asked to write a letter to you regarding
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. The Eleventh Malaysia Plan, 2016-2020, the five-year strategic development plan, lays out the strategies in Malaysia’s final leg in the journey towards becoming an advanced nation by 2020. The Eleventh Malaysia Plan used Blue Ocean Strategy tools and frameworks to formulate
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high-impact
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, low-cost national strategies that are able to be rapidly executed.
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, you need to explain to
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 the purpose of NBOS. The NBOS
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 will start on 13 January 2020 until 15 January 2020
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 8.00am to 5.00pm
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 will be at Kuala Lumpur Convention Centre (KLCC). Invited speakers will be given one hour long, including a
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 question-answer session. In appreciation of your agreement to provide a talk, we would provide the cost of an economy class airfare from your home institution to the
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, hotel accommodations during the
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, and free registration to the
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. Estimated participants for the
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about
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 200 people which including ministers, officers and universities students. Regards that the presentation should cover all
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 of participants. You are allowed to do some jokes to avoid
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 from fall asleep. I do hope that you will be able to accept
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 invitation and respond back to us. Thank you very much. Your sincerely, Rajnikant
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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