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One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. Genetically Modified foods are the best way to solve this issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Now a days it's difficult to feed
world
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the world
 because growing more population instantly. For
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 I totally agree with
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 statement.
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Changing
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conditions farmers
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conditions, farmers
 not sufficient to feed us.
they
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acted upon; influenced
affected
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environment
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environmental
 conditions. Past
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Because
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condition
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decrease
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decreased
, getting different types of cancers, all other disease are invited. Only way to control
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 situation is don't kill the Forests and develop the friendly environment, increase the greenery and many more. Mainly give the awareness to upcoming students for the projection of planet and tell them what happen
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 if we don't. Show to them present
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future
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the world
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