Wild animals have no place in the 21st century,protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree

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Protecting wild animals is our responsibility, wild animals have no place in

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21centry

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'm totally disagree

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totally disagree

totally disagreed

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statement. Animals have

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same equality to live on earth

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By changing in

nature humans

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nature, humans

decided to hunt animals and using

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feed. It's not correct

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responsibility to protect animals almost 30 % of wild animals are

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dying

due to bad environment. People

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have stopped

hunting animals

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it is business killing animals and feed to people's please take responsibility for them. It is difficult to consume these

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pain please realize once feel the pain if we are in that condition. We are

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different to them I conclude that government should take serious actions for protecting animals and seriously punish them Who are killing. We have no law to destroy our planet

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century,protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extend do you agree or disagree

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