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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

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Nowadays, for many people who
are too busy of
Suggestion
are too busy
 working, fast
food
 becomes an important part of their life.
However
, more and more people are grieving from sicknesses as a consequence of overeating fast
food
. Some people think that it is essential for government to enforce a higher
tax
 on
this
 kind of
food
. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
this
 idea. Some people may concern that by dint of
this
 policy, many small companies or stores, which mainly sell fast
food
, have to face with a threat of bankruptcy because of higher producing cost. Ironically, only when the government applies
this
 policy, could we reduce the quantity of fast
food
.
For instance
, thanks to higher
tax
 on
this
 type of
food
, many companies will turn their strategy to manufacture other kinds of
food
, which are healthier.
Moreover
, the consumer will have a lesser
choices
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choice
 of fast
food
 and it leads to the deterioration of fast
food
 in their meals.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that
the high
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the higher
higher
tax
 will impulse the price of fast
food
.
As a result
, the consumer will have to suffer
this
 higher price.
Nevertheless
, only until they have to pay for fast
food
 at a high price, do they stop to buy it.
Therefore
, they will prefer to prepare
food
 themselves
instead
 of eating fast
food
.
For example
, every morning, my mother always design a box, which contains full of rice, meat, vegetable,...
for
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For
 my father's meal at work.
On the other hand
, by virtue of the higher
tax
 on fast
food
, the government will have a greater fund to allocate to the health care treatments for
victims of fast
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victims of a fast
food
. In conclusion,
although
 taxation policy is always a good approach, the governments need to integrate it with other methods
such
 as education, communication
,
Accept space
,
to achieve the best result.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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