In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

Nowadays, for many people who
are too busy of
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are too busy
working, fast
food
becomes an important part of their life.
However
, more and more people are grieving from sicknesses as a consequence of overeating fast
food
. Some people think that it is essential for government to enforce a higher
tax
on
this
kind of
food
. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
this
idea. Some people may concern that by dint of
this
policy, many small companies or stores, which mainly sell fast
food
, have to face with a threat of bankruptcy because of higher producing cost. Ironically, only when the government applies
this
policy, could we reduce the quantity of fast
food
.
For instance
, thanks to higher
tax
on
this
type of
food
, many companies will turn their strategy to manufacture other kinds of
food
, which are healthier.
Moreover
, the consumer will have a lesser
choices
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choice
of fast
food
and it leads to the deterioration of fast
food
in their meals.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that
the high
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the higher
higher
tax
will impulse the price of fast
food
.
As a result
, the consumer will have to suffer
this
higher price.
Nevertheless
, only until they have to pay for fast
food
at a high price, do they stop to buy it.
Therefore
, they will prefer to prepare
food
themselves
instead
of eating fast
food
.
For example
, every morning, my mother always design a box, which contains full of rice, meat, vegetable,...
for
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For
my father's meal at work.
On the other hand
, by virtue of the higher
tax
on fast
food
, the government will have a greater fund to allocate to the health care treatments for
victims of fast
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victims of a fast
food
. In conclusion,
although
taxation policy is always a good approach, the governments need to integrate it with other methods
such
as education, communication
,
Accept space
,
to achieve the best result.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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