Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

In today's world they are a lot of new diseases which we come across on
day
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a day
to day basis. Scientifically animals are mostly used to make a new
drugs
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drug
for the safety.
some
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Some
people argue these experiments should be exempted.
However
, other tend to differ because of their benefits to humanity. In my
opinion I
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opinion, I
believe that it's wrong to cause animals to suffer for the benefit of humanity. On the one hand, nowadays there is enormous diseases which are
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
the people all around the world and animals are playing a major role
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in
developing new medicines and is very beneficial to humans..
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instance
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a small ball with a hole through the middle
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be
rich in protein..
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us we can see pig
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is mostly used
is mostly using
for making drugs to cure for many diseases.
On the other
hand many believe
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hand, many believe
that it is wrong to cause animals. They are many effective
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ways
to be used as taking a proper and
nutritional
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nutritious
diets
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diet
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Taking care of animals and
there
of them or themselves
their
habitats and kids in order to increase
there
of them or themselves
their
population. To conclude many countries are widely using animals for the safety which is morally wrong and by which many animals are extinct and endangered.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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