Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter •tell them when you will be arriving and leaving •explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost •ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
#hotel #arrangements #•tell #•explain #type #rooms #weekend #cost #•ask #activities #places #interest
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to demonstrate my interest in spending a weekend, which will start on 22 Feb, at your
hotel
.
I hope this
letter finds you well. Me and my family, my wife and our two kids, have planned to stay at your hotel
for two nights from 22 to 24 Feb. We will be at the hotel
around 5pm.
I should let you know, that we prefer a room with an ocean view, and due to
my kids' age, one of them three and the other one five, I would like to ask for a room with four beds. It would be perfect if you could provide me with the cost of our desired accommodation.
Please let me know if there are any particular activities around the hotel
which suit my family, my children in particular
. In addition
, I would like to ask for a daycare centre near the hotel
which accept
our kids for four hours on Saturday, Change the verb form
accepts
while
I and my wife will have to go to a concert .
I am looking forward to your prompt answer.
Yours sincerely
Ali ASubmitted by ali on
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Task Response
To improve your task response, ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed clearly and directly. While you did cover all aspects, adding more detail about the type of activities interested in or specific requirements for the daycare could enhance your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
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Writing Tone
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