Some people think that public libraries are no longer important while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The bar chart provided information about the divorce rates in Finland and Sweden in
years
Suggestion
the years
2011 to 2015. Overall, at the beginning of the period Finland represent lower
percentage
and showed some fluctuate at the middle
years
Accept comma addition
years, however
however
, it
become
Suggestion
becomes
higher in
percentage
in final year.
in
Suggestion
In
comparison with Sweden started
increasement
but there was some
fluctuate
Suggestion
fluctuation
and fail in
last year
Suggestion
the last year
.
in
Suggestion
In
Finland started around 35% in 2011 and there was
decreasment
the amount by which something decreases
decrement
in 2012 by four
percentage
in addition
, it showed
increasment
in 2013 and 2014 approximately (39% and 41%) and it is made up stable
through out
all the way through
throughout
the final year 2015. On
other hand
Suggestion
the other hand
,
Accept space
,
Sweden on the starting of
period
Suggestion
the period
made up the highest
percentage
around 45% in 2011 and it
is rose
Suggestion
has risen
rises
to approximately 49% in 2012 but, there was
deacresment
the amount by which something decreases
decrement
on the
last
three years in 2013
deacresed
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
by 3% and it
get
Suggestion
gets
downword
extending or moving from a higher to a lower place
downward
down word
downwards
by 2% in 2014
mo
the natural satellite of the Earth
moon
rover, in 2015 it is showed the lowest
percentage
around 37%.
Submitted by hassan32009 on

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: