People getting addicted to other region food rather than local food. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of it.

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World
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The world
is
geting
the act of acquiring something
getting
smaller to an extent that local ways of doing things
is getting
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are getting
replaced
to
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in
with
a more globalised process. Correspondingly, people are more obsessed with cuisines from different regions rather than the native
food
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essay will highlight on both advantage and disadvantage of
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Main benefit
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The main benefit
of
obssesion
an irrational motive for performing trivial or repetitive actions, even against your will
obsession
with
food
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from a different land is people tend to become socialised. Because cuisines are inextricably linked to the
culture
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of that place. So, by tasting different cuisines people get an
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
to understand various cultures and world may become more peaceful.
For instance
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, pizzas are originally from
Italy but
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Italy, but
it is liked by people all over the world and Wine is
also
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a part of Italian
culture
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Furthermore
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,
human body
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the human body
needs different foods which may have vital nutritional values. So, overall people get the benefit of becoming social by consuming
food
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from a different region.
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, the major drawback of
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is people
become
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becoming
negligent about the traditional native cuisine making them vulnerable.
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, slowly they tend to forget their local language and
culture
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. In reality, many of the traditional
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food
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foods
have become extinct due to people's attitude towards native
food
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and
culture
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, local people in Africa consumed more of fresh
friuts
the ripened reproductive body of a seed plant
fruits
and vegetables traditionally but due to
westernisation
assimilation of Western culture; the social process of becoming familiar with or converting to the customs and practices of Western civilization
Westernisation
now they consume more of
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
convenience
foods.
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has resulted is detrimental effects on the health of people. In conclusion,
main advantage
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the main advantage
a main advantage
of people getting addicted to different
food
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is they get socialised easily with people from
different
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different cultures
a different culture
culture
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the major disadvantage is people develop an ignorant attitude towards their native
food
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and
culture
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as well.
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