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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

#companies #countries
More and more transitional corporations are setting up branches and factories in underdeveloped nations. The primary advantage of large-scale industries is that they will increase employment and reduce
poverty but
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poverty, but
 the main drawback is that local business will suffer. The global organizations often bring employment to developing countries. Nowadays, numerous countries produce multitude specialists in every sphere of the life. When international companies set up their offices in those nations, talented and educated people get their deserved job opportunities.
Moreover
, it will affect to the improvement of
those
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these
quality
 products,
that is
 to say, if more companies are located in the same area with a similar goods can be the best source for products in high standard level. In a recent survey, Nike was named the
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 brand among millennials. The company has raised job vacancies by 25% worldwide, specifically Indonesian Nike workers learning as much as 14% higher than others. Despite
this
 economic
benefits
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benefit
, multinationals are not quiet welcomed in the local market, because they cause market disruptions. With higher manpower and logistic resources multinational companies can make a variety of products quickly and local vendors cannot compete with the price, quantity and
quality
 their wares.
Furthermore
, that
the high
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the highest
quality
 products I needed to pay much more than those produce lower
quality
. Apple is another example. The company
manufacturing
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manufactures
 its products in China.
However
, the major drawback of multinational company investment is that loco companies cannot be recognized as a best manufacturer as Apple and locals still would like to get Apple products. In conclusion, even though those multinational companies products are
expensive it
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expensive, it
is still provide
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is still provided
has still provided
still provides
 jobs for local people.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations (MNCs)
  • Foreign direct investment (FDI)
  • Developing economies
  • Infrastructure development
  • Capacity building
  • Cultural diversity
  • Sustainability
  • Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
  • Technological transfer
  • Economic disparity
  • Market saturation
  • Brain drain
  • Indigenous industries
  • Expatriate management
  • Trade imbalance
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