Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.

The two plans illustrate the map of a health

centre

in the year 2005 and

also

the present day of the same place after the changes are made.

Firstly

, in 2005,

this

centre

has

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12 spaces

car

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parking.

However

, on entering

this

centre

, on the first left there was a door to the CR3

room

and adjacent to

this

room

was an office.

Similarly

, on the right side, the first door

was

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apply

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led to

CR1

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the CR1

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room

and

besides

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beside

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this

room

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room,

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there was a CR2

room

.

Moreover

, after entering on both

the

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apply

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sides there

are

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were

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seats for people to sit and on the other end there was a

reception

desk.

Furthermore

, on the backside of the

reception

desk and CR2

room

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room,

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there was a physiotherapy

room

.

Finally

, at the backside of the

building

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building,

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there is a big garden area.

On the other hand

, after renovation, the

centre

has many new rooms like the car parking spaces has been increased to 30.

However

, the entrance is shifted to the south-west region and after entering the building there is a children's play area on the right side and the

reception

desk on the left side.

Moreover

, adjacent to the

reception

there is an office and next to

this

is the minor operations

room

, without any changes to the position of

physiotherapy

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the physiotherapy

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room

.

Furthermore

, the rooms CR1, CR2, CR3 and CR4 are adjacent to each other.

Finally

, the seating arrangements are situated in the middle area and the garden is located on the backside of the building.