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In some countries young people work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university. What are main advantages and disadvantages?

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A number of high
school
 juniors in numerous countries would like to take a gap
year
 either to travel or work before to attend university courses.
Majority
Suggestion
The majority
 of pupils in high
school
 prefer to go abroad to have a
year
 off
instead
 of passing directly from
school
 to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. Those who have spent earning work experience and
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 and I brought can give them a more vivid
life
,
that is
 to say, people will have
understanding
Suggestion
understood
 the crucial factors of
life
.
Moreover
, it might
also
 be a favourable reason to be
independent so
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independent, so
 as to make quality
life
 goals as well as coping with the challenges of student
life
. That trend
has been becoming
Suggestion
has become
 the major activity in all European countries
such
 as in the UK 50% of high
school
 finishers took
benefits
Suggestion
benefit
 of having a
year
 off in 2018 and 2019.
On the other hand
, to have a break from academic
life
, young people may end up never returning to their studies or finding it
difficult readapt to
Suggestion
difficult to adapt to
difficult adapt to
 an academic environment.
Besides
, taking a
year
 off and in other
places maybe
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places, maybe
 high-priced as well as requires tons of extra planning, whilst without having required money or careful schedule, people might not get much out of taking a gap
year
. Due to the tremendous number of destitute positions those Chinese students are undergoing, there are only 5% of students can afford to pay have a gap
year
 in overseas. In conclusion, young personalities should be encouraged to broaden that
horizons
Suggestion
horizon
.
That is
best way
Suggestion
the best way
 for them to get it clear perspectives of what they are hoping to do with their lives.
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