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Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #age #eighteen
In today's world, education is very important to live a successful life. So, students must have to study in
school
 till the eighteen. They have to do secondary classes so that they get more job opportunities in their lives. In
school
 some high classes
provides
Suggestion
provide
 basic knowledge of some carriers like medical classes, commerce
etcetera
. I strongly agree with the given statement. I shall justify my views with proper example in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. To commence with, there several reasons responsible for left out the secondary
school
. The main cause of drop out is that
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Tate
 wants to do diplomas after 10th grade. So that, they can easily make their carrier. But due to
this
 they lack their basic knowledge which can use in their whole life. Student's must have to attend their high classes because it provides more job chances. If scholars can attend secondary classes they can get a straight way to their
carriers
the particular occupation for which you are trained
careers
 because it provide basic knowledge of some fields like commerce, medical
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urticaria
.
For example
,
recent survey
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a recent survey
 has been shown that about 70 percent of
person
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people
 who attend high
school
 get jobs
inspite
Suggestion
in spite
 of those who drop
school
 after 10th grade.
Furthermore
, some students drop their
school
 due to family issues. Some scholars leave their secondary
school
 because they have to do jobs for their families and even some persons
can not
can not
cannot
 afford to teach their children in
school
.
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.
 Sometime due to bad health students leave their schools. But if students want to do
study they
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study, they
 have to make proper time table. Students have to do part time jobs so that in remaining time they attend
school
. If students do high classes they get many chances to make carrier in their lives. To recapitulate, I believe that every person should go to
school
 till the age of eighteen. Because it provides future opportunities which helps to become successful in life.

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