You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, -Explain that you would like to apply for the job -Give some details of any relevant experience that you have -Specify the days and times that would suit you
I am writing to apply for the position which was advertised on your Instagram account.
My name is Negar and I live near your restaurant, a walk distance
10
minutes approximately. I have Change preposition
of 10
relevent
experience in cooking Correct your spelling
relevant
along with
serving special food such
as steak on fire.
I was working
in Chalet restaurant for three years as Wrong verb form
worked
waitress
, Add an article
a waitress
while
I was studying in
the university. Apart from my duties Change preposition
at
such
as taking orders and cleaning, I have learnt to serve unique steaks with fire. By 2022, I had participated in some cooking class
and Fix the agreement mistake
classes
currently
I am working as a chef Add a comma
currently,
in
Deja Vu restaurant on weekdays and I am looking for weekend shifts. Change preposition
at
However
, I can also
work on weekdays after 3 pm.
I am an ethusiastic
and hard-working person and with my great skills and appropriate experience, I would be able to Correct your spelling
enthusiastic
rise
your food quality.
I look forward to receiving your Correct your spelling
raise
respond
.
Yours faithfully,
Negar SedighReplace the word
response
Submitted by Negar_seddigh on
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task achievement
You effectively presented your application and relevant experiences, maintaining a clear focus throughout the letter. To further enhance your response, consider providing more specific examples of how your skills could directly benefit the restaurant.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, consider proofreading your letter to correct small typographical errors (e.g., "relevent" should be "relevant", and remember to use periods at the end of sentences). This will make your letter even more polished and professional.
coherence cohesion
You clearly structured your letter, including an introduction, body paragraphs detailing your experience and availability, and a closing statement, which reflects a good organizational pattern.
task achievement
Your use of personal experience and specific skills (like serving "steak on fire") was an excellent way to demonstrate your suitability for the job.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.