In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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Many countries in Europe encourage students to take a gap
year
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after finishing their high
school
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and before enrolling into
an
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a
University.
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time
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helps a
student
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to take a break, think about
thier
of them or themselves
their
future
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goals and enrich their
experience
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. The high
school
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or late
teen age
being of the age 13 through 19
teenage
in a person's
life
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is a very sensitive
time
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. It is the
time
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of maturity, learning to shoulder
responsiblities
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
and slowly transforming into a complete adult. Making use of
this
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time
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properly and efficiently is very essential. Working for
one
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year
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before joining
an
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a
University is definitely very helpful, as not only it will help in gaining valuable
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experience but
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experience, but
also
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will help a young teenager understand the value of hard earned
money
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. Many young adults in their
first
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year
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of graduate
school
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are careless about
money
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. They get ecstatic when they step out of their homes for the very
first
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time
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, enter into a new phase in
life
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and taste certain freedoms.
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, many end up squandering
money
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carelessly on parties, food, accessories and other not so important stuffs. Learning to earn
one
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's own
money
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, he/she will understand the value of
money
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, be more responsible when it comes to saving it. Doing a job for a
year
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before joining the University, will impart the essential knowledge and
experience
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which will prove valuable in the
future
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.
One
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will learn many important skills like
time
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management, team
work
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and leadership. These skills are important throughout
one
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's academic and
work
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life
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. Learning these at an early age is definitely very helpful and
time
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saving. Travelling has a charm of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own. Being an avid traveller and having visited over 60 countries around the
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world I
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world, I
definitely support and love
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
. Taking small risks, stepping out of
one
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's comfort zone in home and exploring new places teaches a lot. Interacting with people of different cultures, learning about their countries and traditions breaks many stereotypes, widens
one
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's horizon of knowledge and makes
one
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humble.
One
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has to shoulder his own
responsibilties
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
, managing and taking care of the funds in a foreign country, taking decisions all by yourself, staying safe, makes
one
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more matured and developed. After spending a lot 12-14 years in
school
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,
this
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one
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year
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break from academic
life
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can be very refreshing and eye opening.
Experience
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is the best teacher. It allows a fresh change from the regular
student
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life
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and helps
one
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to explore the
world
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and learn by interacting with people. University studies
is
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are
a very important part of
one
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's
life
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and
hence
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it is
benefitial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
if a
student
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is well aware of the
future
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path he is going to embark on. To be successful in
one
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's endeavours,
one
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has to make the correct choice and take the right
decision
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at the right
time
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. In many countries and cultures, students are heavily influenced by the society's and
family's
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the family's
pressure. They end up making wrong career choices, or just opt for a
subject their
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subject, their
parents have chosen for them.
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initially
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this
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might seem
helpful but
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helpful, but
many times, students cannot bear the load of the studies, they lose interest, and eventually drop out or change the department.
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causes unnecessary stress and wastage of precious
time
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. To break
this
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circle it is necessary that a
student
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is makes
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is making
makes
has made
is made
a responsible and matured
decision
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regarding his/her
future
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.
School
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life
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teaches us academics, discipline and moral values, but a
work
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environment and travel
experience
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imparts
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impart
hands on skills and knowledge.
School
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life
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is
protective
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protected
and in a protective atmosphere, learning is not complete. Learning deepens and becomes more solid when
one
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learns to step out of the comfort zone in
school
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and homes and take independent steps slowly. Though a travel or
work
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experience
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can help benefit in many ways, but
this
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is not applicable to everyone. Young teenagers tend to be still very immature even at an age of 18 or 19. They do take wrong decisions which
impacts
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impact
and changes their lives forever. Not everyone is skilled enough to walk out alone completely in the
world
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outside. They need a few more years to develop themselves, build their education and
then
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explore. Young people are naive and can be fooled easily. The
world
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outside, be it facing colleagues in an office or interacting with people of a new nation with complete different values and culture, can be risky. It can be dangerous if
one
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is not careful and well aware of his/her surroundings. Youngsters, especially young
women are
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women, are
easy targets for drugs, theft, and other exploitation. While stepping out into an unknown
world
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can be exciting and thrilling, but is
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be
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being
risky if
one
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is not matured and smart enough.
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taking a gap
year
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, can be harmful if
one
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is not able to utilise the
time
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to his advantage. Taking a break from studies, many can get distracted and lose the academic orientation. They can find difficulty in concentrating and might completely lose interest in pursuing a graduate degree.
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of preparing themselves for a better and constructive
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, they might find satisfaction in temporary small jobs. Like everything else,
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also
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has both advantages and disadvantages. Learning comes in various shapes and forms, full of excitement and risks. It is like a roller coaster ride. While we cannot always make the perfect choice and take the best
decision
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, we can
work
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towards taking a good
one
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. At the end of the day,
one
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will have to face both the positive and negative
consequnces
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
of
one
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's
decision
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, so it is important that every choice we make is well researched and responsible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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