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In many countries, men and women are working full time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Both men and women have started equating working in every nation, and
hence
 it is natural that they should divide their
household
 chores among themselves. I agree with
this
 viewpoint as
this
 way of
life
 provides several advantages
such
 as a stress-free
life
 and courage to be independent.
To begin
 with, sharing home chores mainly reduces the
work
 pressure of the couple. Sharing domestic chores reduce the pressure on couples. If one of them has to do all the
work
 alone after office hours, they will be under tremendous pressure. Eventually, the person who does all the domestic
work
 will have no option but quit their job.
This
 will make them miss out on their career and create feelings of resentment.
By contrast
, sharing
household
work
 enables both spouses have a flourishing career and stress free family
life
. Sharing
household
 chores
also
 enable both men and women to be independent.
This
 is because both of them learn to do each and every job at home, and can run the house independently when one of them is out of town.
For example
, many software professionals benefit from
this
 phenomenon because their job requires them to travel abroad frequently leaving their family. In conclusion, working couples should share their
household
 chores because it will help them reduce the workload and in turn, the stress.
Furthermore
, it enables them to be independent when they are all alone. Every working couple should be encouraged to adopt
this
 lifestyle for leading a relaxed
life
.
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