Nowadays, children and teenager play more and more computer games. Parents think computer games have little value and more harmful effects. What's opinion?

In recent years, the issue that children and teenager play more and more
computer
games has drawn extensive attention. Many parents believe that
computer
games have negative influences on children and they should control the amount of time that children spend on
computer
games. Personally, I think
computer
games have a number of positive effects on children despite its limited disadvantages. Admittedly,
computer
games are harmful to children in terms of study and physical health. With the advance of gaming technology and the introduction of
concept
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the concept
a concept
of multiple player,
computer
games become exceptionally compelling. Children found these games very hard to resist and often play these games for hours after hours. It
seriously distract
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seriously distracts
children from
study
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the study
.
In addition
, it is well known that
computer
screen radiation and brightness can cause many health problems
such
as heart disease, stroke and diabetes.
For example
,
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
reported that a 18-year-old die after playing 40 hours
computer
games.
However
,
computer
games have many positive influences on children.
To begin
with, some
computer
games are designed to be very competitive to play and when children play those games they experience the same thing that they experience from other games without worrying breaking bones or hurting themselves.
Also
,
computer
games
are often involved
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have often involved
often involve
collaboration between players. Children can learn some basic social skills with an adult's watching and monitoring. At
last
, some
computer
games help children to gain knowledges that cannot be learnt in school.
For example
, a
computer
game called civilisation can teach children about the history of
human
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humanity
and nations. In conclusion,
computer
games have both merits and demerits. But I believe playing more
computer
games has more positive than negative effects to children.
Therefore
, parents should carefully guide children with
good and educational game
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good and educational games
a good and educational game
as well as mitigate the adverse effects of
computer
games.
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