Nowadays, children and teenager play more and more computer games. Parents think computer games have little value and more harmful effects. What's opinion?
In recent years, the issue that children and teenager play more and more
computer
games has drawn extensive attention. Many parents believe that computer
games have negative influences on children and they should control the amount of time that children spend on computer
games. Personally, I think computer
games have a number of positive effects on children despite its limited disadvantages.
Admittedly, computer
games are harmful to children in terms of study and physical health. With the advance of gaming technology and the introduction of concept
of multiple player, Suggestion
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computer
games become exceptionally compelling. Children found these games very hard to resist and often play these games for hours after hours. It seriously distract
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study
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In addition
, it is well known that computer
screen radiation and brightness can cause many health problems such
as heart disease, stroke and diabetes. For example
, news paper
reported that a 18-year-old die after playing 40 hours a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
computer
games.
However
, computer
games have many positive influences on children. To begin
with, some computer
games are designed to be very competitive to play and when children play those games they experience the same thing that they experience from other games without worrying breaking bones or hurting themselves. Also
, computer
games are often involved
collaboration between players. Children can learn some basic social skills with an adult's watching and monitoring. At Suggestion
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last
, some computer
games help children to gain knowledges that cannot be learnt in school. For example
, a computer
game called civilisation can teach children about the history of human
and nations.
In conclusion, Suggestion
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computer
games have both merits and demerits. But I believe playing more computer
games has more positive than negative effects to children. Therefore
, parents should carefully guide children with good and educational game
as well as mitigate the adverse effects of Suggestion
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games.Submitted by eshwar10882 on
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