In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed. What is your opinion about this?

It has been seen that in many parts of
US
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the US
, the curfew is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
imposed which
further
makes the residents uncomfortable and especially impacts teenagers who have to lock themselves in homes. In my opinion, these
curfews
a small restaurant where drinks and snacks are sold
cafes
are mandatory for the safety and security of the people of a country and is required whenever necessary.
Firstly
, curfews are not
been
the state or fact of existing
being
implemented to
disharm
remove offensive capability from
disarm
dish arm
the citizens and are only implemented whenever the
conflicts
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conflict
situation arises. To illustrate
this
, recently in Jammu and Kashmir the act 157 was implemented due to which the people cannot move out of the houses as the news was
prevaling
most frequent or common
prevailing
prevalent
over the city that few terrorist have accessed the
governmnet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
office building.
Hence
, curfew
there
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there, although
although
made the life
uneasy but
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uneasy, but
was required for the safety concerns of the general public.
Secondly
,
such
kind of
imposement
a feeling of delight at being entertained
amusement
makes the life tough and
miserable but
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miserable, but
its
it is
it's
also
good from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
prespective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
perspectives
as
such
enforsement
the act of enforcing; ensuring observance of or obedience to
enforcement
stops the local from doing any illegal activities as primitive minds only work in the dark.
For example
, a survey conducted by The Times shows that parents are 95 percent satisfied with
such
curfews being implemented during the night as they feel that their child is
more safe
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safer
in
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at
home and
doesnot
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does not
get involved in any of the illegal activities.
Therefore
, curfews are better for youths and try to help the to
saty
stay the same; remain in a certain state
stay
away from illegal activities. In conclusion, curfews are not good for the
economy but
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economy, but
its implementation is necessary for the safety and security of the people especially the youth of the country.
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