In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed. What is your opinion about this?

#areas #curfew

It has been seen that in many parts of

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the US

, the curfew is

been

the state or fact of existing

being

imposed which

further

makes the residents uncomfortable and especially impacts teenagers who have to lock themselves in homes. In my opinion, these

curfews

a small restaurant where drinks and snacks are sold

cafes

are mandatory for the safety and security of the people of a country and is required whenever necessary.

Firstly

, curfews are not

been

the state or fact of existing

being

implemented to

disharm

remove offensive capability from

disarm

dish arm

the citizens and are only implemented whenever the

conflicts

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conflict

situation arises. To illustrate

this

, recently in Jammu and Kashmir the act 157 was implemented due to which the people cannot move out of the houses as the news was

prevaling

most frequent or common

prevailing

prevalent

over the city that few terrorist have accessed the

governmnet

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

office building.

Hence

, curfew

there

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there, although

although

made the life

uneasy but

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uneasy, but

was required for the safety concerns of the general public.

Secondly

such

kind of

imposement

a feeling of delight at being entertained

amusement

makes the life tough and

miserable but

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miserable, but

its

it is

it's

also

good from

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

prespective

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

perspective

perspectives

such

enforsement

the act of enforcing; ensuring observance of or obedience to

enforcement

stops the local from doing any illegal activities as primitive minds only work in the dark.

For example

, a survey conducted by The Times shows that parents are 95 percent satisfied with

such

curfews being implemented during the night as they feel that their child is

more safe

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safer

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home and

doesnot

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does not

get involved in any of the illegal activities.

Therefore

, curfews are better for youths and try to help the to

saty

stay the same; remain in a certain state

stay

away from illegal activities. In conclusion, curfews are not good for the

economy but

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economy, but

its implementation is necessary for the safety and security of the people especially the youth of the country.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed. What is your opinion about this?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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