Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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be discussed in the following lines. On the one hand, the detrimental effect of actors, football players and singers is considered by some to be a serious concern, especially to youngsters. Teenagers sometimes imitate the actions of celebrities, even if

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, the financial recognition to entertainers for their jobs can be understood because their effect is worthwhile. In conclusion, having shown both points of view, some think that entertainers are over paid, while others are

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