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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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Information technology is the hype in
this
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 modern world. Most
education
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institution
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institutions
 emphasizes the importance of computers.
Although
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 being knowledgeable in
this
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 sector is important, There are
also
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 some disadvantages. I strongly believe that it is essential to include computers in
education
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.
This
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 essay will discuss two advantages and disadvantages of
computer
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 usage in
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education system
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the education system
. On the one hand, The
computer
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 based
knowledge
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 is vital for everyone to understand especially
school
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 and university students. The
knowledge
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 gained will help in the efficiency of the workload and the ability to do
further
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 research in the working environment.
For example
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, creating an excel worksheet with
knowledge
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 of all the functions in it will help
student
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students
the student
a student
 to create
data base
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a database
database
 and calculation much faster and accurately than doing it manually.
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, learning
powerpoint
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PowerPoint
 will
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 will ensure a professional standard of work. The
education
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 institution
have carefully studied
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has carefully studied
 the employment market demand and have made computers an important part of
education
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 to give the students a head start.
On the other hand
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, introducing
computer
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 in
school
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 will increase the
school
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 fees. The fees will increase as the
school
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 will need to purchase the equipments and the setup of the
computer
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 rooms needs to be appropriate.
Furthermore
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, profession who
are
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is
information technology
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an information technology
 savvy must be hired to teach the students. All
this
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 will increase the price of
school
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 fees.
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secondly
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Secondly
, children will be so engrossed with
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computer
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the computer
a computer
computers
 as the image and games are very interactive that they will lack social skills with their peers. In my opinion, teaching computers in
school
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 is very important for a child’s future to ensure better opportunity in the work market. With
this
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 basic
knowledge
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 the child will be able to do more complex research for future development. In conclusion,
Although
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 there are some disadvantages it is
devifinatelly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 good and compulsory to teach computers in
school
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 for the betterment of our children’s future.
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