Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

It is argued that methods of early age learning are growing in all demographic societies. While it some people think children can serve their time in their physical activities.

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essay will shed light on the both

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sides

of the argument. In the modern era, early childhood education has become popular in all around the world. The main reason is that children can learn very smartly and

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quickly, which

better to evolve in the academic activities.

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, In the

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couple of

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years

, some developing

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country's

countries'

government

have create

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has created

separate department

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a separate department

for early child to enhanced and build these type of learning path.

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, these

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types

of decision will help government to establish better contribute in their economy as well as children better building block in the teenage.

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, few people think that young children spend time in the physical activities, rather than academics.

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means that children should not be

over burden

burden with too much work or responsibility

overburden

in the initial

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ages, which

reflect to negative

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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

.

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, in the UK, several

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decade most

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decade, most

the children found early

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

disorder which happen due to mental stress can

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cause negative

impact in the future generation.

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, in order to reduce mental stress government must make better policies to overcome

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kind of problems. In conclusion, in today's fast paced world more and more countries focus to give better early childhood education in

form

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the form

of studies. In my opinion, people should give

balance

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a balance

between education by using academic studies and

entrainment

an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention

entertainment

activities.