Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?
It is argued that methods of early age learning are growing in all demographic societies. While it some people think children can serve their time in their physical activities.
This
essay will shed light on the both side
of the argument.
In the modern era, early childhood education has become popular in all around the world. The main reason is that children can learn very smartly and Suggestion
sides
quickly which
better to evolve in the academic activities. Accept comma addition
quickly, which
For instance
, In the last
couple of year
, some developing Suggestion
years
countries
government Suggestion
country's
countries'
have create
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has created
separate department
for early child to enhanced and build these type of learning path. Suggestion
a separate department
As a result
, these type
of decision will help government to establish better contribute in their economy as well as children better building block in the teenage.
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types
On the other hand
, few people think that young children spend time in the physical activities, rather than academics. This
means that children should not be over burden
in the initial burden with too much work or responsibility
overburden
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reflect to negative Accept comma addition
ages, which
consiconcies
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consequences
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, in the UK, several researcher
conduct survey that in the Suggestion
researchers
last
decade most
the children found early Accept comma addition
decade, most
behavior
disorder which happen due to mental stress can manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
cause to negative
impact in the future generation. Suggestion
cause negative
Therefore
, in order to reduce mental stress government must make better policies to overcome such
kind of problems.
In conclusion, in today's fast paced world more and more countries focus to give better early childhood education in form
of studies. In my opinion, people should give Suggestion
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balance
between education by using academic studies and Suggestion
a balance
entrainment
activities.an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
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