There have been some problems with the Internet service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the Internet company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am your client and I use internet services every day.
Last
two weeks I had problems with the internet speed and web resource www.youtube.com.
I working
with social messengers and check new videos which are uploaded by new users, but as how I wrote earlier Change the form of the verb
work
last
two weeks when I opened youtub.com I saw the message «access denied». Also
when I try to open other websites it is too slow and this
issue causes me many uncomfortable situations. I have checked my devices, and all the internet cables and did not see any defects. So I think that problems in your devices or cables.
Please, depart one engineer to my address and I hope he will find problems in my situation.
Thank you for your attention and will send me the answer.
Best regards,
Vladimir BelitskiiSubmitted by samedovateacher on
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task achievement
Ensure the reasons for the issues are more explicitly laid out in the initial paragraphs.
suitable writing tone
Use formal language consistently and avoid contractions like 'Please, depart' to 'Could you please send an engineer...'.
single idea per paragraph
Separate paragraphs more explicitly and ensure that each paragraph addresses a single idea to improve clarity.
greeting and closing
Uses an appropriate greeting and closing which suits formal letter writing.
complete response
Adequately describes the problems faced and how they are affecting the situation.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite