Many people believe that hierarchy developed on basis of cast followed since thousand of years its the right way to run the society. Up to what extent do you agree?
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cast
and lower cast which
is practised for generations is the correct way for the society to evolve. In my Accept comma addition
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this
is an out-dated and unfair treatment which was used during pre-historic times by tyrants.
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,
this
is considered a human rights violation in the modern society and this
type of thought process has no place in the current technology world
where most people have respect to their fellow human .
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for example
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country
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people if I obliged to immigration laws of the of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
country
and have proper documents which meets their immigration criteria then
I will not have any concern and I will be allowed to live freely .
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then
I would be welcomed Also
,
I am sure that I would be adopted as a citizen with equal rights and would never be discriminated because of my race, Accept space
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world
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due to civilisation.
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must say I strongly believe that all Accept comma addition
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cast
systems and inequality should be abolished by the governments of all the nations in the world
.
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actions by the law enforcement agencies of their respective countries .
Accept space
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