Many people believe that hierarchy developed on basis of cast followed since thousand of years its the right way to run the society. Up to what extent do you agree?

Tons of individual feel that there should be superior
cast
and lower
cast which
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cast, which
is practised for generations is the correct way for the society to evolve. In my
opinion I
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opinion, I
believe that
this
is an out-dated and unfair treatment which was used during pre-historic times by tyrants.
Firstly
,
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,
This
method of higher and lower
cast
was formed by dishonest rulers and administrators or the governments of ancient times where having slaves was
common thing
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a common thing
and was thought as
issue
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an issue
of prestige
,
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,
But today
this
is considered a human rights violation in the modern society and
this
type of thought process has no place in the current technology
world
where most people have respect to their fellow human
.
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.
Another point I must make is that
for example
If I want to
immigrate
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
from
third
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a third world country
world
country
and live in a
first
world
or developed
country
like let's
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like, let's
say United States of America
,
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,
In the current
world I
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world, I
would be accepted by the
country
and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
people if I obliged to immigration laws of the
country
and have proper documents which meets their immigration criteria
then
I will not have any concern and I will be allowed to live freely
.
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.
I want to live
then
I would be welcomed
Also
,
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,
I am sure that I would be adopted as a citizen with equal rights and would never be discriminated because of my race,
cast
,
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,
belief or colour in the modern
world
.
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.
This
is the current situation positive situation in current
world
due to civilisation. To
conclude I
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conclude, I
must say I strongly believe that all
cast
systems and inequality should be abolished by the governments of all the nations in the
world
.
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.
I believe there is no support for
this
kind of idiotic
beliefs there
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beliefs, there
is
also
I think organisations like
United Nations
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the United Nations
can help to change the mindset of the backward thinking people if they do exist in
current
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the current world
world
by having awareness programs from grassroots
level which
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level, which
can be incorporated into
school systems
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the school systems
of most countries so that each individual know their
right
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rights
and responsibilities to fellow human and the society.
my
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My
view is that hierarchy
in
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on
the basis of
cast
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the cast
is discrimination and all kinds
cast
discrimination should not be tolerated and should be subjected severe punishments must be enforced against
such
actions by the law enforcement agencies of their respective countries
.
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.
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