The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
The chart illustrates the frequency of
trips
taken by children aged from 5 to 12 from 1990 to 2019 either by car, Use synonyms
bus
, cycling or walking to the school and back.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be depicted that children preferred to walk to and from school, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
almost
equal number of Add an article
an almost
trips
were taken by cycling, Use synonyms
bus
or walking and Use synonyms
bus
both. Use synonyms
Whereas
in 1990 Linking Words
where
Correct word choice
when
car
was relatively the less chosen mode of transport, it changed significantly in 2019, as it became the most preferred choice rather than walking as seen in 1990.
In 1990, walking dominated the choice of travel with around 12 Add an article
the car
a car
millions
taken per year. Change to singular
million
However
, children chose to ride the cycles, take the Linking Words
bus
or even walk to school or back with each grazing around 6 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
taken that year. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
journey
done by car was at the minimum with only 4 Correct article usage
the journey
million
Use synonyms
trips
taken annually.
The tables were turned in 2019, with around 11.5 Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
trips
per year, launching as the most preferred choice for travel, Use synonyms
whereas
walking faced Linking Words
decline
to almost half Correct article usage
a decline
to
Change preposition
of
it's
Correct your spelling
its
initial
value to almost 6 Add an article
the initial
millions
Change to singular
million
trips
. Not only walking, other modes Use synonyms
such
as cycling, walking, Linking Words
bus
or walking and Use synonyms
bus
both saw a relative crunch as numbers went down to almost 2 Use synonyms
million
for cycling, less than 4 Use synonyms
million
for walking and Use synonyms
bus
and at Use synonyms
last
, nearly 5 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
trips
per annum for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bus
.Add an article
the bus
a bus
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, bus, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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