The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The chart illustrates four different types of digital
games
being sold globally between 2000 to 2006.
Overall
, the most popular digital
games
during the period given
was
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were
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handheld
games
.
Furthermore
, there were two types of digital
games
that had a significant rise until the final
years
, namely mobile phone
games
and online
games
. Meanwhile, console
games
had a decrease in global
sales
over the
years
. Handheld
games
global
sales
started from just below 12
billion
dollars
in 2000 and
it
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they
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increased steadily to almost 18
billion
dollars
in 2006.
Whereas
console
games
that appeared in the same year only had half of the handheld
games
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games'
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global
sales
and had a fall to around 3
billion
dollars
in six
years
. There was a sharp rise in online
games
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games'
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popularity as
it
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they
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only started to appear in 2001
which
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apply
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then
being the
second
most popular digital game in 2006 with about 9
billion
dollars
global
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in global
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sales
. The same figure happened to mobile phone
games
which appeared in 2002 and had a rise to just above 6
billion
dollars
during only five
years
of time span.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words games, years, sales, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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