1. Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

A great number of your people, is moving from rural areas to cities, in order to study or work. In my opinion, I think
this
choice can be extremely beneficial on th
e
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in
for
long run, despite several drawbacks It can bring. There are two main reasons for which young people prefer to relocate in the cities. The
first
one is the higher chance to find relevant job and education opportunities compared to rural areas. In fact, cities with high density of population are generally the location of good universities and international business. There is one more reason behind
this
choice, namely the need of youth to live where daily life is lively, where there are an extreme number of opportunities to enjoy life,
such
as fitness, shopping, sports, pubs and restaurants. Admittedly,
this
choice brings some disadvantages.
Firstly
, cities can be extremely expensive. it is
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ommon,
for example
, the situation of people full employed but whose salary is just enough to cover the cost of live.
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living
life
Secondly
, cities can be the place of loneliness, especially in time of sickness and need; people,
for example
, can suffer from a feeling of not belonging despite the huge number of human beings surrounding him.
Nevertheless
, I believe that these problems can be managed with time, above all with a wise use of money and significant relationships who can be very supportive, especially in time of need. In conclusion, the benefits offered by cities, far outweigh the issues that young people must face once they leave the rural areas to succeed in life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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