Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

#life #years #statment #reason

Some people believe that ancient

life

was better than at that moment, while others tend to newest

life

is more useful. I am

inclined believe that

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inclined to believe that

this

time

is really useful and more comfortable than old century. On the one side, ı will argue that newest

time

has more advantages than

last

time

This

is because

technology

provide

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provides

quick transportation and

modern communication device

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a modern communication device

which are helped our

life

more relax and comfort. Take

internet

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internet, for

for instance

, İnternet has leapt to people

life

last

30 years, which is

quit

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

useful for reaching information

such

as by Google or by others website. Advantages of modern

time

are countless. Think about if the internet had not invented during

this

time

, probably, our

life

would have less developed. On the other side, a hundred years

ago unfortunately

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ago, unfortunately

, some useful modern

technology

things did not invent,

such

plan

an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets

plane

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bus,

supperfast

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supper fast

train

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phone, electronic equipment (which is aided us to do housework

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to illustrate

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dishes

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dish

machine

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vacuum cleaner

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iron, washing machine things like that

)

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)

refers to the speaker or writer

am going to give an example, which is

journey

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a journey

the journey

. A hundred years ago, people were riding a horse to transport somewhere to

anothers

any of various alternatives; some other

another

instead

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

plan

an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets

plane

or by bus etc.

Absulately

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Absolutely

, it is clearly understandable, riding horse was

waste

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a waste

time

and it was really unhealthy. To sum up

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Although

some people do not recognize

advantages

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the advantages

space era

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the space era

human’s

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a human’s life

life

is getting well during

last

one century

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with modern

technology

. In my opinion, if the

technology

is grow

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is growing

is grown

grows

well

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well, such

such

this

moment, likely a hundred years later our grandchild will hate

this

section

time

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