Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

people's
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People's
opinions differ as to whether or not
government should
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government, should
emphasize to build the
railway
service
, which is reliable for the citizen. While I support that
railway
transportation is vividly worthwhile to access in any destination.
However
, I partly agree with the assertion.
To begin
with
,
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,
railway
Suggestion
the railway
is the popular mode of transport throughout the world, because people can reach their destination with the exact time.
Moreover
, it is noteworthy that the fare of the
railway
is much lower rather than the vehicle modes.
In other words
, most of the developing and underdeveloped countries people prefer to use
this
healthy
service
, they get at a time not only cheaper of cost the ticket price
,
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,
but
also
enjoying a thrilling journey.They can enjoy natural
scenario
the painted structures of a stage set that are intended to suggest a particular locale
scenery
in many parts
,
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,
while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
from
one
place to another
one
. Indeed, it is quite famous for the student in many countries
,
Accept space
,
because they can chill out with their peers and fellow students in making some activities.
Furthermore
, to bring the regular commodities in any parts is more helpful to use
such
modes
a hypothetical description of a complex entity or process
models
.China
,
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,
for example
,
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,
usually habituate to bringing their products or transfer these items by using
such
mode and is trying to make a model known as
silk road
Suggestion
the silk road
throughout the Asian and European continents
,
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,
which would not only grow up their economy, but
also
make a diversity in the world.
On the other hand
, there are some, who argue that it is not possible to make the train
service
in all parts in any nation, because there are some remote and uphill places in the world, where science and technology has not
reach
Suggestion
reached
yet, may not reach in the
last
two decades,
therefore
, to get
this
aesthetic
facilities
Suggestion
facility
is a
day dream
have a daydream; indulge in a fantasy
daydream
for them.
In addition
to
this
, most of the train lines have been fixed in the certain area, where are needed to go in depending the public modes that run away in the road.Again, tourists prefer to travel in using public modes let alone private
one
.They feel comfortable to travel
this
mechanical innovation, which can get a lot of amenities at a time
,
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,
while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
from
one
to another.If a group of tourist travel in the
hill sides
the side or slope of a hill
hillsides
,
for example
, they have to access
in
Suggestion
to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
natural sites to know and see these eye catching beauties.So, all can be possible by using
such
mechanical mode. In conclusion, it seems to me that
railway
Suggestion
the railway service
service
do not have
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does not have
to suffer the traffic congestion in the street
,
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,
which is worthwhile all walk of people in the state.
Although
, it reduces the risk of
accident
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accidents
an accident
that interlink in the road.

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