1. Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In
this
modern age, it is being considered that electronic books and associated services would be able to take place of traditional books and newspaper.
This
may be true to some extent
,
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,
however
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
donot
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do not
agree with
this
statement completely and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that there will be room for traditional ways along side modern advancements.
E books
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Ebooks
and related products offer options of having
large number
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a large number
large numbers
of books without having to deal with
physical contraints
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the physical constraints
physical constraints
physical constants
physical contents
of management and storage. With associated benefits of wifi and internet, it allows someone like me to access media worldwide giving broader collection to choose from and select
accordingly
. In technical fields like Medicine
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can keep up with updated materials as soon as they come out that would
otherwise
be
imposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
without having
facility
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the facility
of electronic versions. Another benefit is that e books offer a paperless system which translates to being eco-friendly as paper is derived from trees.
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Conversely
, increased
screen
time is the real deal breaker. Spending hours
infront
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in front
of
screen
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the screen
a screen
has
lead
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led
to many problems like increased eye fatigue as well as medical issues like myopia, Hyperopia and Amblyopia. With recent efforts like e ink
screen
to minimise eye strain, it is still a long way to go if it is to replace paper based options. Being a reader,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly believe that comfort and eye strain are the two deciding factors for electronic prints to replace traditional printed texts. It still has a long way to go. To conclude
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,
benefits
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the benefits
of e ink based methods are countless
,
Accept space
,
but increased
screen
time and eyestrain are the real factors that prevent it from replacing traditional printed texts.
However
, if
advanvcements
encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancements
advancement
can tackle
this
issue
then
it may be possible. In
this
time and age
,
Accept space
,
both have their own place and can coexist.

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